Rachel: You didn't add much in terms of statistics, so this remains a problem, but the overall pitch is pretty good. I just wish you'd been able to think about how to use stats as the main way to convince us since this was supposed to be the focus of this assignment. You've got a great tone here, which makes us listen and care. That does help.
Rachel: You didn't add much in terms of statistics, so this remains a problem, but the overall pitch is pretty good. I just wish you'd been able to think about how to use stats as the main way to convince us since this was supposed to be the focus of this assignment. You've got a great tone here, which makes us listen and care. That does help.
ReplyDeleteFinal grade: 43/50