Your volume was a little on the quiet it side, i had to turn the volume up on my laptop all the way. The pacing was okay, it kind of was a little slow, as well as your tone was kind of monotone with the same inflection each time at the end of your sentences. You didn't really do any gesturing with your face or hands, and that may have added to the speech a lot.
You may not want to compare yourself to anyone in a college interview, it takes the focus off of you and brings it on to the other person, whether intentionally or not.
Noooo I lost my comment! Okay, I'll try this again: Rachel- I really like how you started your speech with the word active- it gave the whole thing a nice focus, but considering how active you may be, I would suggest that you incorporate some gestures.
Your volume was a little on the quiet it side, i had to turn the volume up on my laptop all the way. The pacing was okay, it kind of was a little slow, as well as your tone was kind of monotone with the same inflection each time at the end of your sentences. You didn't really do any gesturing with your face or hands, and that may have added to the speech a lot.
ReplyDeleteYou may not want to compare yourself to anyone in a college interview, it takes the focus off of you and brings it on to the other person, whether intentionally or not.
Noooo I lost my comment! Okay, I'll try this again:
ReplyDeleteRachel- I really like how you started your speech with the word active- it gave the whole thing a nice focus, but considering how active you may be, I would suggest that you incorporate some gestures.